Original article posted by thewendy:

Spent

in borderlands left
with all we know
we are good stories
garden warm smooth
jazz hinges creaking
swing wind hollow
bone and all
I know leftover.

Orginal comments:


Nickname: Olorle
Re: Spent
Hmmm… sort of that melancholy-esque sort of pretty. I do get a little lost with the current set up though. I might try to break it up a little with punctuation… though you might be forced to mostly use line breaks and commas so you don’t bugger up the flow.

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