Original article posted by Olorle:

A Blinding Ray
Energy coalesces,
crackling, glowing,
wavering betwee dish
and ball. Lancing
out to play through
eyes, overwhelming
circuitry, frying
receptors, leaving
your foe blind
with but one
trigger pull.

Orginal comments:

Nickname: thewendy
Re: A Blinding Ray
Consider taking out “A Blinding Ray”
Not the most origional image.

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Nickname: -soma-
Re: A Blinding Ray
Wasn’t that a year ago? Geesh…